Insight into The Mendel Chronicles

A writing project by Jeremy Davenport
I want to use this blog to work on my writing skills, and to write something longer than a page or two. One way to do it is by a piece at a time. Blogs is structured much the way I feel like I can write, and so here it is. In your comments, please provide any advice you might have for me to develop my writing skills, and any suggestions you have to improve the story line.

2011-01-17

Author's Comments - Chapter 4

Hopefully by now, I've started to show some improvement. I feel like I'm revealing more of the plot, and developing my characters more fully. Let me know what you think of Chapter 4 as compared to the previous. Have I really shown any improvement in style?
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